How it works

From a blank page to something only you could have written.

Every student starts somewhere different. The shape below is what the work usually looks like, whether we have six weeks or six months.

A hand writing in a spiral notebook with a sharpened pencil
01

The consult

Twenty minutes on a call, complimentary. You tell me the schools, the deadlines and what's already written. I tell you what I'd do first and whether I'm the right person for it.

02

Finding the story

One or two sessions of real conversation, not a brainstorming worksheet. Most students arrive convinced the interesting thing about them is the least interesting thing on their résumé. We go looking for what's actually there.

03

Drafting together

You write between sessions; we work through each draft the way a script gets notes. Structure first, then scene, then the sentences. Expect several passes. That's the job, and it's where the essay starts sounding like you.

04

Line edits and polish

The last pass is craft: rhythm, word choice, the opening line, the ending that doesn't explain itself. We cut anything that's there to impress rather than to tell the truth.

The four ways to work together, and what each costs, are on the Services page.

For students

You do the writing. I make it better.

You'll be asked real questions and given real notes. Nothing about the process requires you to be a natural writer, only willing to revise.

For parents

You'll know where things stand.

I'll tell you the plan, the timeline and what's realistic before we start. During the work, the drafts are between me and your student, which is what makes them honest.

Questions I get

Do you use ChatGPT or any AI?

No. Not for drafting, not for editing, not for generating ideas. Every word of feedback you get comes from me reading your work. An essay written by a machine reads like one, and readers can tell.

When should we start?+

Sometime during 11th grade through the summer before senior year is ideal, since there's room to find the right topic instead of settling for the first one. That said, I take students in the fall, and I've done good work in three weeks. Earlier means calmer, not better.

How much time does this take?+

It depends on the package. A Single Essay Review is two rounds of notes and two sessions. The personal statement inside a Full Application Package usually takes four to six sessions across several weeks, plus writing time between them. Supplementals depend on the school list. I'll give you an honest estimate after the consult.

Start with a complimentary 20 minutes